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Writing a creative review, Cheat Sheet of Creative writing

Indiana State University (ISU)Creative writing

It was an assignment on correcting a review

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2022/2023

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RGM3: Editing and Revising Text Sample Text 1
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Review of Buster Bronco’s Surf Restaurant
Posted by User22
9/23/2021
My revisions are in purple
My edits are in blue
Last week my wife wanted me to take her out to a nice seafood restaurant to celebrate our
anniversary.and I wanted to celebrate our anniversary and we chose to go to Buster
Bronco’s Surf Restaurant.(1) We went to Buster Bronco’s SurfnTurf The following is my
review, which explainswill explain(1) why I gave rate(2) it 3 out of 5 stars. First of all, Firstly,
(3)I will review the atmosphere at Buster Bronco’s. As most of you may know This is a simple
and causal restaurant mainly,(2) you could walk into this restaurant in pajamas and not feel
too out of place. It is a very casual restaurant. The theme and decorations on the inside are
what you’d expect for a seafood restaurant, like such as (4) nets and scuba equipment. They
even feature “Gus the talking Bass” by the entrance. These decorations make the dining
experience feel authentic and fun. Onto to the topic of taste. Buster Bronco’s make an
amazing fish taco. There , there (5) is no getting around that. The fish tacos come (6)
complete with seasoned warm fries on the side. Their shrimp dishes are also quite tasty and
popular. No one is going to go hungry if they order the endless shrimp platter. I literally ate
three plates of shrimp and they kept bringing me more. The overall look of the food is
decent. Second, the service was meh, Now, I would like to talk about the bad part of our
visit, (3) which is why I deleted a star. Our server seemed to be more interested in getting
us outta there out of the restaurant (7) then than(9) helping us. She did bring us extra water
and napkins without us asking. For most people cost will be a limiting factor in going out to
eat. My wife thinks Buster’s is overpriced for how little food you get. I don’t think this is true
because I always leave with a doggie bag that I eat the next day for lunch. So I am getting
two meals for an average price of $20 an entrée. But hey it’s my opinion and you may
disagree. This is my opinion of the visit to Buster Bronco’s Surf Resturant, I am hoping with
this feeback, our next visit will be way better.(4)
Section B:
PA GE 1
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Review of Buster Bronco’s Surf Restaurant Posted by User 9/23/ My revisions are in purple My edits are in blue Last week my wife wanted me to take her out to a nice seafood restaurant to celebrate our anniversary.and I wanted to celebrate our anniversary and we chose to go to Buster Bronco’s Surf Restaurant.(1) We went to Buster Bronco’s SurfnTurf The following is my review, which explainswill explain(1) why I gave rate(2) it 3 out of 5 stars. First of all, Firstly, (3)I will review the atmosphere at Buster Bronco’s. As most of you may know This is a simple and causal restaurant mainly,(2) you could walk into this restaurant in pajamas and not feel too out of place. It is a very casual restaurant. The theme and decorations on the inside are what you’d expect for a seafood restaurant, like such as (4) nets and scuba equipment. They even feature “Gus the talking Bass” by the entrance. These decorations make the dining experience feel authentic and fun. Onto to the topic of taste. Buster Bronco’s make an amazing fish taco. There , there (5) is no getting around that. The fish tacos come (6) complete with seasoned warm fries on the side. Their shrimp dishes are also quite tasty and popular. No one is going to go hungry if they order the endless shrimp platter. I literally ate three plates of shrimp and they kept bringing me more. The overall look of the food is decent. Second, the service was meh, Now, I would like to talk about the bad part of our visit, (3) which is why I deleted a star. Our server seemed to be more interested in getting us outta there out of the restaurant (7) then than(9) helping us. She did bring us extra water and napkins without us asking. For most people cost will be a limiting factor in going out to eat. My wife thinks Buster’s is overpriced for how little food you get. I don’t think this is true because I always leave with a doggie bag that I eat the next day for lunch. So I am getting two meals for an average price of $20 an entrée. But hey it’s my opinion and you may disagree. This is my opinion of the visit to Buster Bronco’s Surf Resturant, I am hoping with this feeback, our next visit will be way better.(4) Section B: P A G E 1

  1. I revised this sentence because there was no need for the writer to but why he came to the restaurant.
  2. I revised this sentence because if you are reading a review you do not now that it is a certain why. They audience is reading the review to learn about it.
  3. I revised this sentence because it just jumps right into the bad parts of the restaurant without a warning or a way to set it up.
  4. I revised the last sentence because he ended it on a bad note you always want to end a review on a positive note. I did that because it is your opinion and we know that I felt like the choice of wording was wrong so I chose the word feedback instead. Section ba:
  5. I edited this because it is explaining it now he has not already explained it.
  6. I edited this because bayou are rating the restaurant not giving them something I felt this was a better choice of wording.
  7. I edited this because when you are listing thing you use adverbs or mainly a transition word you want the review to go more smoothly.
  8. I edited this because when you are listing items that you recommend you use.
  9. I edited this because the new sentence was unnecessary at all. It flows perfectly with the sentence and it doesn’t look sloppy. Section C: a. The introduction was unsuccessful because it did not give enough information to guide the reader in the right direction. The beginning felt too personal and not a view. The focus should have been on the review instead of the name of the restaurant and why they even went. B. The strengths in the review is how he convinces people to come taste the food and talking about the prices. C. The weakest part of the whole review was him giving too many personal details and that it was all over the place. I felt like he could have made 3 different reviews on each topic if he wanted to. D. I find the conclusion to be a succcess because he told us his overall opinion and made the person reading the review feel as they should go or even if he said not to it would be vise versa. P A G E 2